Finding my way – sort of poem or my attempt at rap lyrics

My son Heath is working hard to get a break in the rap scene.  His lyrics are pure genius, he sent me a song by Hopsin to listen to. I then wrote these words to sort of the same beat, I may have gone off track, but only listened once and didn’t want to replay it until this was finished as I didn’t want to be distracted by his words.  Listening again my words wouldn’t really fit the beat but I had fun and writing it made me feel connected to Heath on his level, I hope I succeeded.   This is written in a young male voice, quite a challenge for a not young woman.

You think I’m tripping
but my minds
just drifting
part of me slipping away
You think I’m loosing it
breaking up
bit by bit
I just pray something will stay