Rain – poem

If anyone can give me a better title for this poem please let me know.  It was written in a record marathon when I wrote 4 poems in about an hour.

RAIN

To live is to stand

In a storm

Arms outstretched

Feel the sting of awareness

Face upturned

to meet the tears

Of clouds without linings

Forced to release

The burden of

words unsaid

and deeds not done