My dull winged
moth thoughts
circle light
in dumb pursuit
until singed husk
falls broken
a meager sacrifice
beneath the goal
of brilliant understanding
I would prefer
Leopard cognisance
Solid muscle stalking truth
to pounce with purpose
and consume
still pulsing
food of knowledge
When this ‘poem’ was first bouncing in my head. I was going to use a butterfly instead of moth, flitting lightly to light upon beauty or understanding but I felt that the butterfly is too pretty and attractive for the purpose, the moth I feel works better both because it is less attractive and the moth being drawn to light but impotent is a more apt choice.
What led to these thoughts was a suggestion from a friend to study by correspondence but I have little faith in my ability to focus on such a task and achieve success.
The leopard metaphor was inspired by an outing to Lory Park organised by Evelyn from Clamber Club Benoni. Lory Park is a small zoo in Gauteng which has several rare and beautiful cats including white lions, jaguars, tigers and pumas.
Lovely I like it but I think you are right, chew on it for a while and the right words will come well done